Well, I remember specially a field trip. It was (the)(X) last year when we went to San Pedro de Atacama in the Antofagasta region. I remember this field trip because I like mountains and all the special meaning about the culture of the mountains, like the music and the native people. In this case(P) we went to a house of atacameñan people,(P) the leader (The Boss) of the house, called Carlos, (who)(X) was very friendly when he opened the house for us. He told us about his life style and usually he cooked typical atacameñan food. Also we have ^long time to talk with Carlos about his people and their stories, generally old stories, about his mom or his family. But (in the)(PP) nights we went to the town to drink something and talk, and that was very (funny)(WW). Well, generally we had a few field trips to other places around the Salar de Atacama and we visited other people who live there to talk about their problems. Finally, we travelled all the way long by car and it was so long, but I never get(T) bored, because we heard lots of music or we have(T) long talks too. Sometimes, we smoked some cigarettes and other green things and it was so nice, because the people who I travelled with are wonderful guys.
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