Natalia's last post

I would like to visit Egypt,(PP) because is a beautiful place with an interesting history in the past and in the present this country have different things to show at the people of others (WF)countries and others(WF) cultures.

I think that(X) Egypt is the best place in the world for travel(T) because is my favourite place and if I can go to the Egypt I would go with my boyfriend for enjoy(T) the travel with a important person for me. In this place I would visit the pyramids, desert and the museum because I love the history of Egypt (^)I think that is very interesting and exciting.

In Egypt, You(S) can visit many places as the Giza pyramids, Nile river, white desert, desert of Nubia, the temple of karnak, temple of Dendera and others (WF)temples because there are many temples in Egypt to visit and I believe that missing (WW)time me.

I chose Egypt because from(WW) girl I liked the history of the great pharaohs and the mystery of the pyramids;(PP) I feel that it should be fascinating to be in front of a pyramid by(P) both its size and grandeur (^)it is amazing to think as in antiquity(WW) did these large constructions.

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Sebastian's last blog

Well, I would like to visit Venezuela, mainly,(PP) because I like the lifestyle of this country. Personally, I would like to taste the Venezuelan food because it is a fusion with other style of foods, for example, the Venezuelan food has a little of Indian food, French food, Italian food and Spanish food and all this(WW) with Latin American ingredients. This combination makes meals full of different mystical flavours. Other reason, (PP)for that I would like to go to Venezuela is because the geography is very intense, moreover, I like the tropical climate(WW), like the full rain with warm temperatures, for example. About the natural resources in Venezuela you can find beautiful beaches, wonderful rainforests and precious mountains and rivers, one of them is the waterfall “El Angel” with 500 meters of height, which makes this waterfall unique in his kind. Venezuela has many types (species) of animals too. Other reason why I would like to go to Venezuela is because the cities have a precious architecture with wonderful colonial and vanguard buildings. In Venezuela, what I would like to do is: fishing and go(T) to the beach to relax. Also, I would like to fly in helicopter over a rainforest.

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Jaime's last post

Hello

This is a good moments in my life

I remember that i (S) have(T) 13 years old, and the photo was took(T) in the house of my best friend Manuel.

In(P) this moment I was in 7(^) grade in the school and my principal(WW) hobby was listen(^) music, also in this époque(WW) i(S) shared(WW) more time with my oldies friends.

(^)Is in this moment of my life when I beginning(T) to play guitar and also I think(T) in former(WW) a punk rock band and met pretty girls. Hahahaha.

This picture means a lot of things for me, (^)is very important for the context and the situation that happened. I remember the separation of my fathers, also the birth of my second niece.

In(P) this time my life was different, i(S) don't had (T)responsibilities, problems or big obligations, only the school.

I still remember that moment, this picture was saved in my closet more than ten years ago and only two weeks ago was scanned in my PC.

Well, this is a little part of my history(WW), I hope you liked it.

good bye!

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Error Correction II

This video is so funny. I believe there are many ways to learn English, (P)especially(X)as a second language, but I've never imagine that this would be one of these ways.I've met a lot of people that remember things by saying it many times(WE), singing it or relate them with another thing or situation.(WE)It is always important to know that people have different forms(WW) to add new knowledge to the things they already know.So, we can think in this video as a way to include new vocabulary or phrases to be used in a context. If this(WW) Japanese girls mixed songs and exercises with English, we can do some creative activities for our students.Never forget, students must learn with things they know(WE) use and feel comfortable with.


This video is so funny. I believe there are many ways to learn English as a second language, but I've never imagine that this would be one of these ways.I've met a lot of people that remember things by repeating, singing it or associate them with another thing or situation.It is always important to know that people have different styles and strategies to add new knowledge to the things they already know.So, we can think in this video as a way to include new vocabulary or phrases to be used in a context. If these Japanese girls mixed songs and exercises with English, we can do some creative activities for our students.Never forget, students must learn with meaningful things that they use and feel comfortable with.

Error Correction I

I didn’t have enough time to look out for all the topics and tips that this web page has but I can tell you that it is very helpful.It is a very interesting web page because it’s always very useful to have some activities already designed –(like the ones)(X) like cartoons- so you need to put it in(P) practice with your students in any(WW) way they would like to (change it.)(X)Also, the grammar part has a lot of information with enough examples for explaining the way they use the language.(WO) So you can give some examples and look some more closer to the reality of your students.(WO)(WW)In terms of Phonetics, you can also find all the sounds –being explained(WE) and audio- so they can be used inside the classroom.Students usually feel more comfortable when they have the example(WW) and then they can do their activities, in any kind of exercises. So, this web page can help us now as students and later as future teachers.(WO)


I didn’t have enough time to look out for all the topics and tips that this web page has but I can tell you that it is very helpful.It is a very interesting web page because it’s always very useful to have some activities already designed –like cartoons- so you need to put it into practice with your students in a way they would like to.
Also, the grammar part has enough examples and information needed for explaining the way people use the language. So you can give some examples, look and adapt them to a reality closer to your students.
In terms of Phonetics, you can also find all the sounds –audio and explanations- so they can be used inside the classroom.
In any kind of exercises students usually feel more comfortable when they have a model which they can follow to do their activities, So, this web page can help us now as students and later as future teachers.