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I would like to visit Egypt,(PP) because is a beautiful place with an interesting history in the past and in the present this country have different things to show at the people of others (WF)countries and others(WF) cultures.

I think that(X) Egypt is the best place in the world for travel(T) because is my favourite place and if I can go to the Egypt I would go with my boyfriend for enjoy(T) the travel with a important person for me. In this place I would visit the pyramids, desert and the museum because I love the history of Egypt (^)I think that is very interesting and exciting.

In Egypt, You(S) can visit many places as the Giza pyramids, Nile river, white desert, desert of Nubia, the temple of karnak, temple of Dendera and others (WF)temples because there are many temples in Egypt to visit and I believe that missing (WW)time me.

I chose Egypt because from(WW) girl I liked the history of the great pharaohs and the mystery of the pyramids;(PP) I feel that it should be fascinating to be in front of a pyramid by(P) both its size and grandeur (^)it is amazing to think as in antiquity(WW) did these large constructions.

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