Jaime's Post September, 8th

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hello
Well, in this moment of the year in my country are happening more things. But this month is full of contradictions, principle[11] for historical success.Fiestas patrias for me is not important, but is a good moment for[12] share whit[13] my friends and drink chicha (a typical drink made for grapes).The Chilean people in this date enjoy in family, go to the fondas (a typical place whit[14] traditional things), dancing[15] cueca (traditional dance) or cumbia, drink alcohol, and eat much meat. Also some go to the circus and the rodeo.All the houses fly flags (is a law...hahahaha) and the children’s fly a kite.When was[16] a child I remember that my favourite games were spining top and marbles, and we met with the family in the grandmother’s house; my father with my uncle’s fly[17] a kite.My vision is different today, 10 years ago that I am a vegetarian [18] and I do not like to abuse animals, I don’t believe in traditions, and the rodeo and the circus whit[19] animals are horrible for me, however I like seeing people happy on this date and the reunion of families.My best 18 was in 2002, when I went to a party that lasted 3 days!!! All night long hahahaha..Bye.

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