Jaime's Post August, 25th

My experience learnig[11] English
HelloWell, my experience in the English language was from 12 years at the school. In this moment I began learning, [12] in 8th grade I had a private class in the afternoons, but I didn’t take it seriously why[13] was very bored to me.In secondary school I don’t [14] had English classes, only French; and my previous learning was forgotten.However the English language ever [15] has been in my life, in the music, in the television, in the text and in my partners to the other sides of the world.Now in the Internet era is very important learn to speak English. I remember in the[16] 2000 came a band from Holland; his name was Cathode and only speaking[17] English. I was whit[18] them in their presentations here, and was[19] very difficult for me to talk whit [110] them.Now in the university, the English language is used for all[111] , but my learning is a little slow. I think that learn fine [112] the language because the class are good and my interest are[113] more than before.In the last time my preoccupation[114] for the language has been superior to the other years, I believe that my motivations are in the [115] following my studies out of my country.I hope when to [116] finish the course whit[117] good notes[118] and also have a greater knowledge of the language, maybe in the day of tomorrow I can visit other countries and win a grant for[119] study, this is my idea in this moment and I can get.Bye!

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